Please Don't Let Me Go Falling From The Sky

Please Don't Let Me Go Falling From The Sky

A Poem by Smitten Drive
"

A song of mine.

"

You have been oh, far to nice.

I really I'd like you to say.

The world is one more place to be,

When we are in our dreams.

 

Just so you know, I am here by myself

alone in the dark.

I just can't, belive my eyes

tonight is one of a kind.

 

Oh I know it's far to right.

but I swear that I've lost my mind

I like the sound my baby girl

and I know that things takes time

 

maybe we'll take that walk

and talk about all our thoughts.

maybe we'll take that drive

never look back again

 

Oh we know

we will always be

together, forever, in this empty street

Oh we know

we will always be

together, forever, in this empty street

© 2010 Smitten Drive


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excellent job :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a really good song. The rhythm is great, and the way you word things fits perfectly. I like this part best:
"maybe we'll take that walk
and talk about all our thoughts.
maybe we'll take that drive
never look back again"

Nice job. Keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Smitten Drive
Smitten Drive

Richfield, Eastern, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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Wrting for no one else other than myself. I fill paper with ideas and stories buried deep within my ever-spinning mind. Most call me Mark Wetherby and I have a love for writing and music. I surely .. more..

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