Stranger In My Daddy's Clothes

How I feel about being left.

You were never there
We never went to the fair,
New family new cares.

Time after time I trusted you,
I loved and adored you,
My whole world revolved around you,

Daddy you didn't need me
But i damn sure needed you,
Cold wind blows. All my cards,Fold,

end of the game.

Author's Note

Please Ignore Grammar Mistakes

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

such emotion and power, loneliness as well and hurt.
"Daddy you didn't need me
But i damn sure needed you,"
the bold font, all the more feeling to it.

[Stormy Weather]

Aw, I can kind of relate. :/ This is good!

[Legacy]

James,

You have the power within your fingertips - giving off steam, never felt so good.

Tragedy is in your favour, James... let it rise within you and help you thoughout your life. You have come to a painful realization, two wrongs don't make a right, yet occasionally it is righteously felt and delt.

Speaking of tragedy, every write thus far has been of tragic moments... I encourage you to wrap it up in the blanket with you and let it keep you warm, however, remember there is (sometimes rarely) a light that shines brighter than any pain you suffer in this life.

Please enter this into Poetic Infusion Society's Dark Secrets contest.

Have a great day,

Legacy

[qaralynn]

beautiful write..Has a lot of emotions in it and I'm very sorry that this happened to you

[Briley]

Even to people who can't specifically relate, it still really touches the soul. Amazing.

[TJ]

Tragic and beautiful James, I could really feel the pain in this one. I hurt when I read it.
Good work

[ErinLovesYou<3]

My absolute favorite

[..]

My goodness this is sad and gripping, tugs at the heart. I liked the last two stanza's