The Truth Will Come

The Truth Will Come

A Poem by Time.

I'm lost, the ground is glossed with an icy frost, who am I? the guy that told the lie, but why? But no matter how hard I try, I still ask why? I wish I could cry, No I wish I could die, Nomatter how hard I try, I still ask  why? I lied, in which I tried to hide, but you cried, you know I lied.

© 2011 Time.


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Time.
Don't worry about grammar/spelling - enjoy

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Nice use of bold letters and underlining. There is feeling in this... nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the rythem to this poem... when you actrully take time to read what you wrote you see strong meaning..... Great write James

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lying is never a good choice. It always hurts people in the end.

Posted 11 Years Ago


so powerful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, the flow of this in my head was like a nursery rhyme, but then you add the meaning and there's a twist. It's great.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this, I can relate to it as well. It's beautiful and stiched perfectlly. Amazing job James (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


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TJ
Loved the format and all the internal rhymes in this one. Packed full of despair and hopelessness as well
Good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Likey

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem captures wonderfully the sense of what lies can do!

For me atleast it does. Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lies are so powerful and yet weak against truth and time.. Great write James..x

Posted 11 Years Ago



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