The First Kiss

The First Kiss

A Poem by Time.

We kissed, our lips finally touched, things were never rushed,
As we headed downhill I thought, this must be godswill, 
Is this love real? I love how she made me feel...

Slow we go, toe to toe, where we stand, A simple plan,
no where to land,  A spark leaving it's mark in the dark,
this is the place it will all start, Hit with cupids dart.

© 2011 Time.


Author's Note

Time.
Ignore grammar, Spelling.. Sorta short I know I haven't been doing much lately but I just sorta wanted to get something new up! Hope you enjoy.

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Very sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome!


Posted 12 Years Ago


It was amazingly adorable!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very cute. Good poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite the charmer you are my friend ;) its perfect!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Perfect

Posted 12 Years Ago


Absolutely perfect.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is adorable :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a cute poem(: I like it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Okay, well I have to admit this. I've never had my first kiss, so I'm not entirely sure how it feels. But it's a great description of the moment. It may be short, but the person who assigns the length of a poem, is the writer, which in this case is you, so that doesn't matter. I liked this though.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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