To who'm it concerns...

My skin, burns wipe away your concerns.

Life is full of twist and turns,

Will I be missed?

Surely I have the right to be pissed,

Broken wrist, after our very first kiss,

Did I ask for this?

Rain falls, I ignore all of my calls,

To complain, would be to admit my pain,

Never will I play that game,

Contain the pain,

Author's Note

Ignore grammar

Reviews

[TJ]

Powerful short piece. Very good. Layer of emotion! This poem, like many of us, especially males, buries emotion under layers of touch exterior because I'd you're hurt then the other one wins!

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

So much hidden emotion sewn into each word. Your feelings are prominent yet indecisive at the same time. A talent you have for writing and hiding it seems ;). Wonderful piece James, all the best man.

[stars are far]

this is so deep it was really great to read this :)

[Lily Mae]

I feel this one deeply.,,.awesome write...x

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice, i love this line:
"To complain, would be to admit my pain,"
i think at the last punctuation in this line "Contain the pain," u meant to put a period instead of a comma ? But beside that lolz, i like this a lot, it shows great feeling in it, i like this.

[Poetic Beauty]

contain the pain says it all. Men try to hold in their emotions and not let others see what truly lies deep inside.

[Zachary_James]

This is brillant james i like the emotion in this poem.

[alley]

I really loved it! The passion in this poem is amazing.. keep doing this!!