A Poem by Snapdragon

my lips
make me burn
urgently reach
until my soul giggles and I'm all yours

© 2010 Snapdragon

Author's Note

This is a Tetractys poem with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10.

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I rarely undertake to write a poem to a specific form--they for the most part seem rather contrived. This is an exception. Please check out my "Watcher", written for a contest of Helena's, using a form I'd never seen before, called "The Wave Waltz"--she had probably cooked it up especially for the contest, come to think of it!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Making someone laugh is very attractive.

This poem really tickled my fancy.

Well done!
Antonio :))

Posted 13 Years Ago

I love it, I love the words so much :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

I love it. It's beauty is in its simplicity.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

This is honestly adorable... ive just fallen in love with the idea of a soul being able to giggle :) do carry on writing, your mind is obviously brilliant :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very sentimental and sensual.
First time I hear about a Tetractys poem. Interesting form and you've done it justice.

Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is very cute! I should try doing one of these sometime......

Posted 13 Years Ago

Hey, this is pretty cute. I think I'll try it out on the next Heifer I meet.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on June 14, 2010
Last Updated on June 14, 2010



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