Let Go

Let Go

A Poem by Akira Kodama
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Not what most would consider "true" poetry, but I don't really care this time.

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It's really weird
Knowing that we won't ever speak again
Death has never really affected me this way before
It's never been one that I was truly close to, or one that I actually cared about
I can't do her justice with pixelated words
She knows I loved her
And so do I.
Well f**k, I can't think of anything else.
Just take this song, sister; I know you loved it.
Again, I love you.

© 2013 Akira Kodama


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I thought this was yet another break-up piece, but then death comes strolling up out of nowhere and sits down next me. The contrast was unexpected and striking. This poem is obviously very personal, but its touch is definitely universal.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An honoring and honorable piece...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's as true as any I've read, something sent me by here today, I saw the bicycle, and I'm glad I came, this is beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

Bicycle?
This is such a raw, emotionally charged piece, Izaak. The video made the presentation all the more haunting. Genuine, heat felt pain and an ardent longing, anger, even, for things to be...different. Very, extremely sad...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

She would have liked it....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

You think I don't know who you are? Bellhopper. F**k off; I already know you don't care about any of.. read more
quinfinn

10 Years Ago

let it go, Izaak. this hate and dissension must stop somewhere.....jadey would not approve of bicker.. read more
You've put you're heart in it, these are words from your soul...That makes it poetry, and one of the best kinds.
She'd love this, and the song. Beautiful tribute

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i would call it poetry

beautiful work at that

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you, Izaak...for your thoughtfulness.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

She deserves it.

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Added on June 11, 2013
Last Updated on June 11, 2013
Tags: Jade, love, sister, music, fucker


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