I Am a Deep Piece of Writing

I Am a Deep Piece of Writing

A Poem by Akira Kodama
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Appreciate and glorify me.

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Enticing opening line
Gripping second
Flowing third
Transitional fourth
Revealing fifth
Impressive sixth
Saddening seventh
Bereaving eighth
I am text
I am a word
I am a sentence
I am an idea
I am an experience
I am a relief
I am an expression
I am a means of gaining attention
I am a topic of conversation
I am the center of the universe
I am pretentious
I am a liar
I am arrogant
I am guilting
I induce false sorrow
I am what separates you peons from the elite; me!

© 2013 Akira Kodama


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"I am what separates you peons from the elite; me!"
Dryden said writers and poets were mad. They were just observers not wanting to be involved and wanting to swim in everything. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

Of course, this is satire. How sickening it would be if I felt that way.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I don't know. Sometimes to write with a honest pen. You must do things you do not desire to learn.



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"I am what separates you peons from the elite; me!"
Dryden said writers and poets were mad. They were just observers not wanting to be involved and wanting to swim in everything. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

Of course, this is satire. How sickening it would be if I felt that way.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I don't know. Sometimes to write with a honest pen. You must do things you do not desire to learn.
I have read your work and you my friend truely posess a golden pen! BRAVO! I look forward to more of your work, brother!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

Huh, thank you. That means a lot. I'm glad you enjoy.
This is the first of your poems, of the few that I've read, that I've really loved. "I am the centre of the Universe," "I am pretentious." I can agree with that, on a personal level.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hmm... not sure I understand. Except I'm pretty sure you called me a peon ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

Hint: It's satire
Pi Cee

10 Years Ago

A rather nice one.
Sometimes it feels good doesn't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Unbelievable,
The arrogance is spot on
I am absolutely in love with this

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ego maniac much? lol.This is an interesting piece well written smacking of arrogance well done:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woah...power surge ;) Pleased to meet you :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akira Kodama

10 Years Ago

You as well. Thanks for stopping by.
Ruth

10 Years Ago

Welcome :)
The ego is so powerful in this write...You have captured it marvelously...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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