A Wonderful Day

A Wonderful Day

A Poem by Akira Kodama

Stealing bodies, not wholes
Cleaning with the pestilence of the "fellowship"
Separated by ideals of hurt and personal gain
Not together, but collided
Nothing saving one from the other
Keeping love for a rainy day
"It's always sunny in America!"

© 2015 Akira Kodama

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JOY DIVISON! Aha. I enjoyed the bittersweet ending lines, they carry a truth which tends to cut to deep to the bone for most people. Well penned. I wish you all the best

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Akira Kodama

6 Years Ago

Mm, yes. Thank you so much, you as well.
I keep telling a friend on facebook to quit pissing on my rainbows and unicorns. I try to be positive, ya know. I see the rest. I acknowledge its existence. Writing it goes to somebody like you :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on October 3, 2015
Last Updated on October 3, 2015