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Poet at heart. Romantic by nature. Nature the style. Styled by experiences. Experience this world that is my mind...
GOOD-BAD DAY

GOOD-BAD DAY

A Poem by Sneh



Reluctance?
Ah, not a chance!
The lies hold for long,
Becomes the truth,
As miseries do too!

Gaining in a game, conquering
Losing in a flame, loitering
the flimsy emotions
Not concerned though!

Say as chess, ludo,
War or any mess
Turns, bring hope, wish
Vibrance and positive essence!

My presence is full of importance
Irrespective of crowd,
Squealing and burning their own grass,
Leave at it, unless time will get pass!

It's like, choosing,
Lavender or musk,
Based on the pleasing sense,
Same as,
Cries or giggles,
When you set with enchanting grace!!!






© 2018 Sneh


Author's Note

Sneh
Have a great day!

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Good days, bad days we all have them regardless of the company we find ourselves in. I also got the feeling that the writer is strong minded and knows her worth and won't be swayed by the baying crowd. Interesting read Sneh. Happy New Year to you.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Such reviews boost me up more and more.... Grateful that you took time to read my words.
Hap.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Sneh.



Reviews

Your first verse is a stunningly original way to re-craft the old adage: if you think it, so shall it be. I have been healing from a neck injury where I had to learn to walk again. Many times it felt like there would be no more progress, but even six years out, I'm getting back parts that haven't worked all this time. Your poem is an artful, enthusiastic way to say all things are possible, if we only believe (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

1 Year Ago

This made my day, really grateful and induced by your words.... Keep supporting !! thanks, With love.. read more
sometimes we fail to see things as they really are, we wish them a certain way and then believe they have magically turned into what we have wished....and then sometimes it just goes that everything has its opposite...and what goes up must come down, and vice-versa...
i like the juxtapositions in this...the conflict of feelings.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob for the read and encouraging review! Good wishes thine way :)
Good poem Sneh, confident and self-assured. Understands in life we all have good and bad days. and goes with the flow.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

I wish your good days defeat bad ones! Thank you so much! :)💐
Dawn

2 Years Ago

And like wise Sneh, beautiful days ahead always for you too. Dawn.
I like that last stanza a great deal it is a poem all in itself!!! This is one of those poems that must be spoken to catch its full spectrum and this writing is indeed a full spectrum. I enjoyed this:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thanks much, you're appreciated!! :)
This is so very good and I really like this and your last stanza a lot, nicely written and expressed

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Means alot Brandie!
Thank you and have a beautiful day :))
This is amazing piece of writing. Sneh
Thanks for sharing.
Looking forward to read more

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the visit ! :))
Very interesting poem. We all have days when we're down, but friends can help you up c: I liked this poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Yes friends can but I think self inducement is long term. Anyways, thanks for the visit, have a love.. read more
Lies never become truth and sooner or later the house of cards people build comes down, because truth is eternal and lies change their shape often . Truth is God- Mahatma Gandhi.
" My presence is full of importance irrespective of crowd," speaks volumes about confidence. I hope you always be that assured of your importance! Wishing you all the best.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

indeed 'Truth is god' ,if it is chased....still many beliefs are hold as truth, who knows if they ar.. read more
Mrudula Rani

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
A joyful distraction, Sneh. Your imagery is insightful, showing wisdom beyond your apparent years. There is a historical quote from a US admiral -- "Full speed ahead and damn the torpedoes." David Glasgow Farragut would be proud of you, too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Mr. Fowler!!
your thoughtful review has soared my spirit a bit more.....hav.. read more
"The lies hold for long,
Becomes the truth,
As miseries do too!" this alone holds a testament to a life observed

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

A kind of holy truth for me....thanks again!

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