GOOD-BAD DAY

GOOD-BAD DAY

A Poem by Sneh



Reluctance?
Ah, not a chance!
The lies hold for long,
Becomes the truth,
As miseries do too!

Gaining in a game, conquering
Losing in a flame, loitering
the flimsy emotions
Not concerned though!

Say as chess, ludo,
War or any mess
Turns, bring hope, wish
Vibrance and positive essence!

My presence is full of importance
Irrespective of crowd,
Squealing and burning their own grass,
Leave at it, unless time will get pass!

It's like, choosing,
Lavender or musk,
Based on the pleasing sense,
Same as,
Cries or giggles,
When you set with enchanting grace!!!






© 2018 Sneh


Author's Note

Sneh
Have a great day!

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Good days, bad days we all have them regardless of the company we find ourselves in. I also got the feeling that the writer is strong minded and knows her worth and won't be swayed by the baying crowd. Interesting read Sneh. Happy New Year to you.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Such reviews boost me up more and more.... Grateful that you took time to read my words.
Hap.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Sneh.



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There lies a spirit of strength and individualism in these words. Empowerment to be your own in a world that is either at times against you or entirely indifferent of your very existence... When we realize the the thing that gives us the most strength is dependent on our own resolve and dedication, others be damned, the hard walks in life become a bit more bearable. Reading this made me feel these things. I enjoyed this very much.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

yeah, true that is. its all up to us....we have to preserve strength for the uncertainties.
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At first, I wasn't sure if I liked all the exclamations. But upon rereading, I suppose it adds personality due to the forcefulness and assuredness of the words. To be very honest though, I'm still not quite a fan of the last line, especially with the triple exclamation points. Somehow, the words didn't fit with the overall tone and message before it. Nevertheless, I appreciate the bold encouragement to push on through the good-bad days like turns in a game.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time.... !
This is amazing. The sound work throughout this piece is phenomenal. I must admit I'm not sure I understand a couple of lines, probably due to grammatical errors and unnecessarily placed commas. But the essence of the poem is simply brilliant! Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thanks emipoemi for the visit!
I will put more efforts to improve make readers understand be.. read more
beautiful and direct messages. I love these direct disclosure. blessings dear friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thanks Mr.Jaber for stopping by... Happy New Year ! :)
The opposites of life. They will test us. I enjoyed the dance of thoughts. Maybe, no wrong or right. Just life dear poet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. Happy New year.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thanks dear Coyote, I wish this new year showers joy upon you!
Cheers,,,, :)
Sneh
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
we all have days like this..... and with a bit o luck, they can only get better :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Yeah, a bit of luck and efforts can make things all set, ...thank you for putting in here your kind .. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago

my pleasure & true.... N :)
As we head into a new year we will all have good days and bad days. It's up to us to make sure the good days out number the bad ones..how we do that is up to us. Thanks for sharing


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Thanks George for this thoughtful review! Many warm wishes and Happy New Year!** :))
Good days, bad days we all have them regardless of the company we find ourselves in. I also got the feeling that the writer is strong minded and knows her worth and won't be swayed by the baying crowd. Interesting read Sneh. Happy New Year to you.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Such reviews boost me up more and more.... Grateful that you took time to read my words.
Hap.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Sneh.
and i`m sure you are sitting in enchanting grace,as your words follow suit
happy new year

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sneh

2 Years Ago

Yes, as sitting in a roller coaster and moving into 2019 ....
Wishing you and yours a Merry a.. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you,happy new year

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