O Fragile Heart

O Fragile Heart

A Poem by Adam M. Snow

This mechanical heart, beating slowly -- imperfectly. Such fragile, like glass


O Fragile Heart
Written by Adam M. Snow

This mechanical heart,
beating slowly
-- imperfectly.
Such fragile, like glass
to fall apart,
-- shattered
as moments pass.
-- Beating,
-- depleting,
as it stops,
-- silent.

© 2018 Adam M. Snow

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Very powerful, yet simple. It does a good job conveying a great message. The picture does what it needs to convey the image yet I found myself more drawn to that than the words a bit.

Posted 1 Month Ago

So much conveyed in so few words. Not easy to do, my friend, but you nailed it. Kudos!

Posted 5 Months Ago

A few words but full of beauty!! Picture matching so well with the poem!
Wonderful writing friend!!

Posted 1 Year Ago

I love how simple the poem is; while still conveying power and a lot of emotion.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Powerful and worthwhile use of words. The reader felt the pain of a dying heart. No wasted words. just outstanding poetry shared Adam.

Posted 1 Year Ago

so even a mechanical heart can be broken

Posted 1 Year Ago

and that about sums it all up, in a beat life stops

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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7 Reviews
Added on October 1, 2018
Last Updated on October 1, 2018
Tags: night, death, nature, family, friend, love, romance, world, earth, beauty, blind, dark, poetry, prose, short, dream, fantasy, snow, stars, broken, time, haiku, lyrics, faith, hope, twilight, ghost, pain, new, epic, fanfict, sonnet


Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

Glendale, AZ

"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..


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