A Love without a Song

A Love without a Song

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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I humble not for I but to wake again Even though I may have sinned, I've sinned for you, not for I. I've loved no one but myself.

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A Love without a Song
By: Adam M. Snow

I humble not for I but to wake again
Even though I may have sinned,
I've sinned for you, not for I.
I've loved no one but myself.
I dream of no one but I.

But it's you I see at night.
It is you my reflection choose,
Not your ghost for my sake but I.

But I humble not for I and not for you;
I humble without saying, an unjust love.
I see what of the world behind us.
I see an unjust life of eternal bliss,
A love without a song;
I see the forever us.

I humble now and forever among all things.
Until I see again, I am blind to you.
Until my time of death draws near
and yours as well,
We to be drowned upon sorrow, forevermore.

© 2012 Adam M. Snow


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This is my other favorite too now!
Well done as usual!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautiful and so enchanting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deep and engulfing. I was sucked inthe mOment you said "I've sinned for you, not for I." beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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so beautifully enchantedly written as always...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really really nice. Love the title, nice lines... different, and nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful! I just love your work! Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A interesting poem. First lines got my attention then the poem change direction.
"Even though I may have sinned,
I've sinned for you, not for I."
A strong ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a remarkable poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lovely poem with a interesting title.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful poem...Love the title
Love has many discriptions..but in the end I think love wins

This reminded me of Romeo and Juliet for some reason

Posted 12 Years Ago



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