A Notion of Thought

a little comical poem about the state that the UK is in

So they say that in the UK, 

The government are doing their best!

But look at the homeless folk out on the streets,

They'll tell you that they're not impressed

The government have put inflation up,

That cannot surely be right,

If inflation gets any higher,

Then there will surely be a fight!

Petrol is so expensive now,

We can't afford to drive,

But if you ask the government how,

They'll tell you Electricity will thrive!

The UK is depressed, can you really tell?

For all the US Citizens that say it's great,

Trust me don't come here,

It's HELL!

How on earth is this country so messed up?!

Surely David Cameron rocks,

But i'm here to tell you straight up,

I think he's a c**k!

Some teenagers in Britain,

Complain they start a job at 9am,

Others don't have that luxury,

So where the hell's the bane?

I guess to sum up the UK,

It's really quite a shock,

But don't tell Cameron he think's it's great!

What a monumental C**K!

Author's Note

First poem i've ever written, tell me what's wrong with it :D tell me honestly if you think its good, why is it good? is it bad? why is it bad? There are SOME verses that don't rhyme but im here to tell you now that poem's don't have to rhyme to be poems ;)