Unfolding Layers

Unfolding Layers

A Poem by K Antonacci

If there are people who crave

To meet someone as interesting

As their soul mate, so be it.

 

If someone wants to give

Their time, heart, and soul

To another, so be it.

 

If i was to walk beside you

And let you teach me things

Translating your manners, so be it.

 

If the law would ever

Restrain two hearts as bright as ours,

And we could run away, so be it.

 

But if in the end,

You and me is eternal,

I know that nothing would stop us.

© 2008 K Antonacci


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This is what soul mates are all about it is a joining of spirits. Well said and well written.
Hugs Debby

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great flow in this poem as well as a message I haven't yet heard. Super job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


realllly quite fantastic my dear!!!!! love the form, love the flow - and the repetetion of so be it.

'If the law would ever

Restrain two hearts as bright as ours,

And we could run away, so be it."

that was my favorite verse, but everyone was really great in its own right. i'm a big fan of this piece. i enjoyed it immensely - a lovely, enjoyable read :)



Posted 12 Years Ago



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