Liars and Lovers

Liars and Lovers

A Poem by Jessie
"

Most of these were for school. We were talking about Passion. Bleck. Just Kidding not bleck.

"

Your hateful,

you mislead me,

surprised me,

decieved me,

We are Liars and Lovers.

 

My friends say your in love,

that's why,

you brake me,

Your a Liar and Lover.

 

Tell me to give you a chance,

why should I? I don't think so,

They call you a Lover,

I call you a Liar.

 

I gave in,

I gave you a chance,

2 weeks later I left,

you say I'm your lover,

I say your a Liar.

© 2008 Jessie


Author's Note

Jessie
Sorr if you don't like it.

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it is great hun!
i love it!
but i hope it was something you made up!
i dont want anyone to treat you this way!
if it is true and about a certian GAY boy i will have a few words with him!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this.
Something like this has been said about me before.
But it wasn't a girlfriend/boyfriend type relationship.... it was a plain old 'friendship'.
I will always be the liar and they... they call themselves the lovers.

I noticed one spelling mistake in the second stanza, third line. Brake should be spelt break.
Other than that...
This was an excellent piece. I love the feelings it provoked.
My favorite part was:
"Your hateful,
you mislead me,
surprised me,
decieved me,
We are Liars and Lovers."
It was strong.
I loved this whole piece!

-Elissa :)


Posted 12 Years Ago



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