Liars and Lovers

Liars and Lovers

A Poem by Jessie

Most of these were for school. We were talking about Passion. Bleck. Just Kidding not bleck.


Your hateful,

you mislead me,

surprised me,

decieved me,

We are Liars and Lovers.


My friends say your in love,

that's why,

you brake me,

Your a Liar and Lover.


Tell me to give you a chance,

why should I? I don't think so,

They call you a Lover,

I call you a Liar.


I gave in,

I gave you a chance,

2 weeks later I left,

you say I'm your lover,

I say your a Liar.

© 2008 Jessie

Author's Note

Sorr if you don't like it.

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it is great hun!
i love it!
but i hope it was something you made up!
i dont want anyone to treat you this way!
if it is true and about a certian GAY boy i will have a few words with him!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like this.
Something like this has been said about me before.
But it wasn't a girlfriend/boyfriend type relationship.... it was a plain old 'friendship'.
I will always be the liar and they... they call themselves the lovers.

I noticed one spelling mistake in the second stanza, third line. Brake should be spelt break.
Other than that...
This was an excellent piece. I love the feelings it provoked.
My favorite part was:
"Your hateful,
you mislead me,
surprised me,
decieved me,
We are Liars and Lovers."
It was strong.
I loved this whole piece!

-Elissa :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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