Your Hatred

By: Emo Nikki

Your hatred,

breaks me,

tears me to pieces,

and I know you don't care.

 

Your hatred,

scars me,

kills me,

saddens me,

I cry when I think about you,

but you don't even care.

 

Your hatred,

is spiteful,

cruel and untouched,

but I KNOW, you don't even care.

 

You tell me you love me,

you can't live without me,

you ask if I need you,

I reject you,

you felt hurt and betrayed,

triple that and you'd feel like me.

 

Author's Note

Please, is this good? I'm not sure.

Reviews

[Lizzy]

this is a really good one!
you really are showing the emotion!
Jess, i am HAPPY for you.
you can move on now!
that is great!
just keep looking for a good one!

[Last Lying Look]

Yeah this is good.
This is really good. I really like it.
How do you know they don't care though?
Maybe they are afraid. Afraid to show that side. Afraid to do what's right. Afraid of themselves. Who knows?
Excellent poem anyways. Great work!!!

-Elissa :)