Crushed

I don't know if it's actually a poem but I ust put that it is.

I thought it was a crush,

we looked into each others eyes,

there was magic,

a spark,

he kissed me,

and i kissed him,

it was heaven,

it was only a crush,

i ended up in love,

he was the one,

but he loved her,

i cryed for him,

i begged for him,

i ended up broken,

i ended up crushed.

Author's Note

Sorry it's kind of long like vertically, but i had to say it.

Reviews

[NattyPattyx3]

awwhhh ): that's all sad and such!!

[Sharkapillar]

I freaking loved this. I love reading stuff that I can relate to.

[LovelyLise :D]

Nice. Very good. I like it.

[Kira]

Don't worry, it's not that long at all. And, yes, anything pretty much is a poem. Without any sort of rhyme or reason is still poetry, it's called free verse.

Haha, I wrote something like this about 2 years ago, it was called "Crushed by a Crush". Sounds kinda the same. I guess great minds think alike? :D

[gabby]

o wow jess this is so ddddddddddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppp