Moon's Light

A poem I did to tell suicidal people that it's okay. The Poem tells that it's easy to give up on all hope but if you work hard then you will get noticed.

Moon’s Light,

All day I wait,

All night I’m great,

Some see me, some do not,

How so easy it must be, 

To give up like a breeze, 

Although it’s uneasy,

I will do it with ease,

Someday,

Somewhere,

One might see,

One might believe,

At the dawn of night,

I am the light.

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the last two lines are very clever, using dawn to characterise the night, almost a role-reversal between night and day