Broken Spirit

Broken Spirit

A Poem by Solitaire-P0ette
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"There comes a time when everyone experiences a broken spirit"

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Broken behind the emotion
Resistance walls put up.
Only opening a small amount. Not
Knowing when the next stone will
Enter through the glass.
Never once remembering that I can still be

Seen through the glass. I 
Put my head down, wishing I was
Invisible. Wipe the 
Remaining shame,
Impotent spirit,
Trying against life.

~My broken spirit is the blame~

© 2010 Solitaire-P0ette


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I know how you feel...I feel the hopelessness in this. I'm sorry...Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice write! "Never remembering that I can still be" This is an awesome line, we at times can loose ourselves and become product of environment. It's only the strong that soar through! Go Sis.
Peace
BoSweets

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is so sad but true. You touched a topic everyone can relate too. Job well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


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awe how said but very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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how emotionally sad...this tugs the heart springs as memories of times like this come flooding back. nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago


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ZeN
I could continue reading forever.. really.. i could..

Posted 9 Years Ago


the sentence structure itself is a mesmerizing emotive pull drawing anticipation~ the entire form drawn in blue is fluid in its comprehensive state of devastation in flux~ you've an expert eye for the whole composite~I've noticed this in all your poetics~

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice touch of emotion you put into the poem:) i love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is ingenius, my dear girl. The lines merging into one another with such a powerful message. I'm just blown away by you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This one..literally..tears at the heart..
Wanting to be invisible..being broken..vulnerable...
Incredibly relatable
Beautiful poem...masterfully written..magical

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2010
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Solitaire-P0ette
Solitaire-P0ette

Kansas City, KS



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I'm a young girl who loves to write. Writing is my outlet. When i feel that no one will listen and i'm overwhelmed, my emotion comes out through my poetry. Writing is my passion, and no one can EVER t.. more..

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