Broken Spirit

Broken Spirit

A Poem by Solitaire-P0ette

"There comes a time when everyone experiences a broken spirit"

Broken behind the emotion
Resistance walls put up.
Only opening a small amount. Not
Knowing when the next stone will
Enter through the glass.
Never once remembering that I can still be

Seen through the glass. I 
Put my head down, wishing I was
Invisible. Wipe the 
Remaining shame,
Impotent spirit,
Trying against life.

~My broken spirit is the blame~

© 2010 Solitaire-P0ette

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I know how you feel...I feel the hopelessness in this. I'm sorry...Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice write! "Never remembering that I can still be" This is an awesome line, we at times can loose ourselves and become product of environment. It's only the strong that soar through! Go Sis.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is so sad but true. You touched a topic everyone can relate too. Job well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

awe how said but very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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how emotionally sad...this tugs the heart springs as memories of times like this come flooding back. nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago

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I could continue reading forever.. really.. i could..

Posted 9 Years Ago

the sentence structure itself is a mesmerizing emotive pull drawing anticipation~ the entire form drawn in blue is fluid in its comprehensive state of devastation in flux~ you've an expert eye for the whole composite~I've noticed this in all your poetics~

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice touch of emotion you put into the poem:) i love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is ingenius, my dear girl. The lines merging into one another with such a powerful message. I'm just blown away by you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This one..literally..tears at the heart..
Wanting to be invisible..being broken..vulnerable...
Incredibly relatable
Beautiful poem...masterfully written..magical

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on September 18, 2010
Last Updated on September 18, 2010



Kansas City, KS

I'm a young girl who loves to write. Writing is my outlet. When i feel that no one will listen and i'm overwhelmed, my emotion comes out through my poetry. Writing is my passion, and no one can EVER t.. more..


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