Coma, eyes open.

Coma, eyes open.

A Poem by Somebrownnerd
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The dreams you control, are the ones you get lost in.

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Coma, eyes open.

Peace in the lucidity of a dream.


Faces growling,

eyes swelling.


Hard hitting mentions, of you in passing.

Fluid sounds of a guitar rasping,

I’m knocked back in.

Reality’s rude interjection,

“awake”.

© 2012 Somebrownnerd


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Somebrownnerd
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goodness, pondering write, quite enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2012
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