Gazing upon flame.

Gazing upon flame.

A Poem by Somebrownnerd

The tantalizing touch of your radiance,
Disguising a specter within.

Every breath you inhale, breeds;
Those glowing embryos.
Their wailing echos the wake,
a soot filled quietus.

Pulling long lingering gazes,
"The state of nature".


© 2012 Somebrownnerd


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Every breath you inhale , breeds.
Nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on September 20, 2012
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Tags: fire, flame, destruction, neccesity

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