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The Flesh Eaters

The Flesh Eaters

A Poem by SonOfPlunder
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Another dark poem for you all, though this one done in a different style, thanks to some advice from a fellow poet. Enjoy

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There is a place down below
beneath the city streets
it is a place of pain and woe,
it's where the cannibals eat

They stalk the tunnels for their prey
bounding through the gloom
their hunger grows everyday 
this place will be your tomb

Twisted limbs and bloodshot eyes
like something spawned form Hell
they are the eaters of the flesh
these deadly cannibals 

So take care whilst you sleep tonight
and don't go out alone
they can smell your fear and your fright
and will take you from your homes

For they are always hungry 
and they want you for their meal
for if they drag you down below
then your fate is surely sealed 


© 2014 SonOfPlunder


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Awesome poem. Very dark and creepy. Right up my alley.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Interesting idea with a really dark feel to it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is such a unique and beautifully inked poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it! It's so creepy!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bone-chilling anticipation, great write sir! How I missed this I have no idea... Goosebumps, I love it... Amazing rhyme and flow, adds to the atmosphere and the tone...

Posted 8 Years Ago


SonOfPlunder

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much April, really glad you liked it! It's probably my favourite piece of my own work.. read more
AprilRN1210

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome.... My second fav the other poem of yours I read I like a little more than this .. read more
SonOfPlunder

8 Years Ago

Well thank you, for liking both of them :)
ooooo. im grinning from ear to ear, its great! thank you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


SonOfPlunder

8 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it! Let me know if you would like to read more!
Fantastic. I love the dark feel and creepiness to this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SonOfPlunder

8 Years Ago

Again, thank you very much :)
Tinkerbellje

8 Years Ago

You're welcome :-)
A superb piece that masters a sense of horror and darkness. Great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


SonOfPlunder

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it!
Darkness at it's best. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SonOfPlunder

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, glad you liked it. If you want more darkness, try reading Blood Rites

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SonOfPlunder
SonOfPlunder

Cardiff, Wales, United Kingdom



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29 year old amateur fantasy writer and dark poet from Cardiff, South Wales. Currently working on a novel with the intention of eventually making it into an expanding series. more..

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