Love's Hypocrisy

Love's Hypocrisy

A Poem by Song of Mercy
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Thoughts on christianity hypocrisy

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The bow was knotted so prettily
Atop her hair it sat
Dressed up in her finery
On a pew she sat.
In the front her family poised in a row
 
In the back her family hidden in a row
On a pew she sat
Dressed up in her sisters dress
Atop her hair it sat
The simple ribbon tied so prettily.

© 2009 Song of Mercy


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This was a great play of lines. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one was a very creative poem.I liked this one.Telling how she looked and all.Nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You do create poems that make you think and explore, as you search for answers. Enjoyed. Phantom............

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Song of Mercy
Song of Mercy

Springfield, MO



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I am a single mom of 4, 3 at home, 2 are homeschooled. I also moderate another website. Between the two I am fairly busy. Even so, I write approximatly 3 hours a day. I am a new writer and pretty thi.. more..

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