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Winter Of The Heart

Winter Of The Heart

A Poem by Scarlet Letter
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(Haiku) The heart is empty as the winter's frost comes

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I feel nothing now
A barren, empty wasteland
Darkness covers me.

© 2010 Scarlet Letter


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You manage to bring across the emotions - or the lack of such - very well in those few lines. I think the form supports the feeling, that because it's a haiku, you can convey that there is "nothing" better than you would, perhaps, if you wrote more. It is possible to write a lot about nothing, but it makes more sense to write little, as you did, and leave that to sink in. That works very well here, well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2010
Last Updated on September 12, 2010
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Scarlet Letter
Scarlet Letter

Canada



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I love art of all forms. The types I practice are writing, charcoal/oil pastels, music, photography, and more. Every time I look at something I see if it would be best as a picture, drawing, poem, or .. more..

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