Winter Of The Heart

Winter Of The Heart

A Poem by Scarlet Letter
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(Haiku) The heart is empty as the winter's frost comes

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I feel nothing now
A barren, empty wasteland
Darkness covers me.

© 2010 Scarlet Letter


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You manage to bring across the emotions - or the lack of such - very well in those few lines. I think the form supports the feeling, that because it's a haiku, you can convey that there is "nothing" better than you would, perhaps, if you wrote more. It is possible to write a lot about nothing, but it makes more sense to write little, as you did, and leave that to sink in. That works very well here, well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2010
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Scarlet Letter
Scarlet Letter

Canada



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I love art of all forms. The types I practice are writing, charcoal/oil pastels, music, photography, and more. Every time I look at something I see if it would be best as a picture, drawing, poem, or .. more..

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