One Touch

One touch left me breathless.

One touch was all I needed.

One touch made me realize it all.

All you ever wanted was a life without me. To love that other girl. To grow old with her. To have a family with her. To forget me.

One touch said it all.

One touch told me what I needed to know.

One touch was all I needed.

You never wanted me. You used me. I knew it. We all I knew it. But I let you sting me alone on lies. I let myself believe it all.

One touch was all I needed.

One touch help me through it.

One touch and it was over.

I watch you walk with her, a mocking smile across my face. I know how it will end. I know that she's using you. Now, your going to be strung along on lies.

One touch is all you'll need...

Reviews

[Jami Nicole]

I really liked this poem. I can connect with emotion and feel it really deeply. Keep writing because this is great. You'll be published someday. :)

Love, Jami

[watch_the_world]

I LOVE this, oh wow, im amazed, you are a great writer keep to it xD

[Emma Lee]

It's great Sookie, I knew you could be a great writer if you put your mind to it. This is better then some of the poems I write. Damn you. ;)

I love it^^
Love your inspiration [ ;) ],
Emily

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow...a simple touch can really do a lot, can't it? But yes, touching skin is how we get sparks and flares...it's wonderful at times and at other times, it can leave us broken and defeated.

[Jessica]

Great job! You can be my teacher with your good hand, brain and a pecil. i LOVE the "You never wanted me. You used me. I knew it. We all I knew it. But I let you sting me alone on lies. I let myself believe it all" and " I watch you walk with her, a mocking smile across my face. I know how it will end. I know that she's using you. Now, your going to be strung along on lies. "

Keep your good work up.

[NovaKai]

I really liked the irony at the end :) It was well written, good job.