Sadness Inside Her Heart....

Sadness Inside Her Heart....

A Poem by SasuSakuLoVer
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A poem...all about the sadness in her heart...

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What have I done to her?
Did I do something wrong?
Please tell me anything love

Her Heart is filled with sadness that's why...

Is my love not enough?
Is there anything she want?
Please tell me anything love

Her Heart is filled with sadness that's why...

Did I ever hurt her?
Did I do anything wrong to her?
Please tell me anything love

Her Heart is filled with sadness that's why...

Are you sad?
Are you suffering?
Are you in pain?
Please tell me anything love

Yes,Her Heart is filled with sadness and more than you can imagine.

© 2013 SasuSakuLoVer


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TS might not be Frost or Eliot but combined with Nix they made music. Perhaps another colab?...

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SasuSakuLoVer
My friend wanted me to write a poem,I'm not really good at writing these but at least I tried so Please Review!!!

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You sure do have a good writing emotion skills!!!!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SasuSakuLoVer

9 Years Ago

You too!
awww. That was so cute yet sad XD!
I love these kinds of poems
IT WAS AMAZING!!
You had good repetition with the line "Her heart is filled with sadness"
Your poem is also very relate-able. :3
I LOVE IT!!
GOLD STAR!! ★★★

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SasuSakuLoVer

9 Years Ago

thank you and you're also amazin!

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My nickname is sola but I wrote SasuSakuLoVer instead so you either call me sola or my display name. my age,I won't tell you. my hobbies are,I have a lots of hobbies but I love making Naruto Fanfi.. more..

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