You Once Said To Me...

This is a woman who loved a man but that man once said many things to her and never did any of them...

You once said to me you loved me,

But you never loved me,

You  once said to me you will not hurt me,

but you hurt me,

You once said to me you will never leave me,

But you leave me,

You once said to you will awknowledge me,

But you never awknowledge me,

You once you accept me,

But you never accept me,

 

 

Am I nothing to you?....

Am I?!

 

....

 

I love you but...not today and not tommorow,

I will never love you ever again,

Because...

 

You are nothing to me now than a staranger who once said many things to me and never did any of them...

Author's Note

sighh,that was a long poem it just pop on my mind and this is the result please review and rate.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

It is a good poem. Not my cup of tea but I guess I'm just weird that way, so just ignore me. ^^
There is one suggestion though (even though I'm in no position to criticise anyones spelling when I'm no good at it myself), but try, if you will, changing that, "To" to a Too" in the acknowledge sentence.
Just a thought. ^^
Good poem.

[SasuSakuLoVer]

thanks but its oky really :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. C:

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. When love is found out to be a lie. Disappoint our heart and mind. I like the closing line in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Thank you!

[The dark story]

a nice piece some grammar errors.. though i enjoyed reading it.

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Oh thank you and I know there's some grammar errors but I'm trying to improved my writings.

[The dark story]

Your most welcome.good luck for thhhat :)

[Diasha]

that's a sad poem. ..
I like it though
It's very heartfelt and reminds me of my friend
It's good write
GOLD STARS!!

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Thank you so much!

[Alexis Markum]

it was good except for some misspellings like accept needs to be accepted you know but in all it was a great poem i really enjoyed it

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Thanks and sorry for misspellings.

[Alexis Markum]

Its okay everyone does it

[XxAmandaxX]

Read the latest chapter then you will get it :P oh yeah nice poem :)

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Thanks again Amanda!!!