The White Horse

The White Horse

A Poem by Sophster300

As He leaps and overlaps many

The white horse makes it to the shore

But then he stumbles

And is unforgivingly washed to the start of another race

 

As He leaps and overlaps many

The white horse scrambles up the sand

But then he slips

And is yet again dragged to the starting point

 

To try once more.

© 2011 Sophster300


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Sophster300
Really, really random lol

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Hmm, it's interesting and different, but I loved it! Way good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh how often we
Find ourselves
In such a place
As the handsome White Horse
Brilliant

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such futility
The white horse struggles to start
And to start again.

-A haiku review

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it its really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem is very good. it remindes me of something my gran use to tell me. it's nice. well done...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 11, 2011
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Sophster300
Sophster300

Warrington, United Kingdom



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