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A Poem by Alisha Martin

I took you up
You took me down
No one else around
 
Sweet words pouring
I'm not soaring
 
But you keep going
Like I'm knowing
 
Then you're gone
I'm all wrong
 
Near death I see him
Before I teem
 
Thy savior restores
You're still torn
 
But I can't apologize
Even though you agonize
 
This is me
That is you
 

© 2010 Alisha Martin


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Kinda feels like it sounds... Remorseful? Like no matter what these two can't change something....

Posted 14 Years Ago


rating lol i forgot

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like!! i think its beautifully expressed

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 14, 2010
Last Updated on January 21, 2010
Tags: friend sadness heartbreak


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