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I took you up

You took me down

No one else around

 

Sweet words pouring

I'm not soaring

 

But you keep going

Like I'm knowing

 

Then you're gone

I'm all wrong

 

Near death I see him

Before I teem

 

Thy savior restores

You're still torn

 

But I can't apologize

Even though you agonize

 

This is me

That is you

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[K-LeB Deathman]

Kinda feels like it sounds... Remorseful? Like no matter what these two can't change something....

[Matt]

rating lol i forgot

[Matt]

I like!! i think its beautifully expressed