Break

Break

A Poem by Desiree O'Neal

Before the silence

After the last word

Before the wave hits the earth

Caught in the silence

Caught in between

The bend before the break

This is the mercy

Not the faith

This is the proof

Not grace

If I never loved you

If I never felt your touch

If I never had to

I know I would have still

Mourned your touch

If it wasn't so worth it

This wouldn't be the bad before the worse

Nor the bend before the break


© 2018 Desiree O'Neal


Author's Note

Desiree O'Neal
Basted on a song I listened to about a year ago.

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The title first caught my attention and I was not disappointed by the contend. On the contrary, there were some excellent bits...............

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
Neville

6 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely ......N
May I ask, what is the poem about, O'Neal? I am curious to know.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

This was about this girl leaving this other girl and she was talking about how it was worth being wi.. read more
ZakLeonRamsey

6 Years Ago

Like Resa said in the review section, you've nailed it once again.
Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

:D .
Once again you nailed it!
Very nice read.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

Thank you, your words on my comment sections are nothing but encouraging and up lifting.
Wow... You write songs too! That's so cool! Keep doing what you do... I loved the emotions and it's so beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful words and I assume a beautiful song.im taken aback from the message of it all.wonderful to read

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I really enjoyed this. very emotional and gripping. Music has a way of inspiring us all.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I try to listen to something as I write, when I listen to music and write I can write any.. read more
"Nor the bend before the break"
This poem truly got me thinking, beautifully written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Desiree O'Neal
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I'm young but I love to write. I love anime, cats and I like to draw. more..

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A Poem by Desiree O'Neal



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