Parting Song

i am not me , you are not you .

Wind is sailing and so is time 

I am your foe and you are mine.

Put a knife at my throat,

 I will see how neat you strike .

I will be quicker still,

 with  my fingers and the knife .

This  is "the" life.

Lips  soaked in Crimson,

 hearts in Vengeance.

Let us wait for the perfect radiance of yellow 

to Spill hundred colours through the spectrum of Clouds .

Let me hold your hand

 and watch the sunset 

and then I will help you find ways to fit.

Our hearts  in a sack ,

the voice of our souls crack .

Now,  I am wrapped in black.

 The Voices echo in the hallways of our vien.

 The toxicity of treachery rules our reign .

I am frozen in snow, 

you are burning in fire .

I will wait for the fuel to be gone

 and then, I will sing you a parting song.

Author's Note

Feel the words, and tell me where they take you ?

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Bonnie and Clyde, I don't know much about them, just that they were gangsters and lovers. But that's where your words took me, other than to the scenery of your own imagery. Your poem was pensive and very well written. The ending kinda made me think of Juliet, something she'd say to Romeo, or the other way around, I don't know too much about that either, but I liked it and thought your words were well-composed. tyfs

[Chris Shaw]

Some relationships turn sour, and these descriptive words tell me that this is a parting of foes, not friends. Sadly that can happen and when it does the heart takes a beating which can take time to recover from. The trust takes even longer. Fine poetic expression.

Chris

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It's a world with a lot of hate and betrayal and when we are absorbed into such emotions, especially by someone we trusted, its natural to send them a parting song to end the association. Some nice images throughout, Ankita.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I liked the hardness of the words. Do or die? Fight or run? Some parting songs. Leave us with bruise soul and heart. Thank you dear Ankita for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ankita Dwivedi]

So true !thank you for visiting , dear .
Love , Ankita

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ankita.

[AJNJ]

Nice imagery.
I felt like two enemies are fighting and the one who wins sends the other one a parting song. Am I right 🤔?

[Ankita Dwivedi]

Not 2 individuals ...it's about people in general and also that sadly but it is now a world where the cold hearted wins .partially right , yeah .thanks for reading ,mate.
Love, Ankita

[AJNJ]

Keep writing 😊 You're welcome

[John the Baptist]

This one seems to have gone beyond words.

[Ankita Dwivedi]

i missed to post the poem earlier ..i have edited it .sorry .XD Read it now.
Love, Ankita