Broken

This was written when I was really depressed.

My heart is like a broken hour glass,

Time no longer goes by, as if my heart has stopped,

I feel tears roll down my face, feeling of the rain pour beneath my eyes,

I feel the ice spreading through my viens,

As I become paralyzed

I thought it was meant to be,

Let alone you and me,

I'm standing above a Glacier,

I feel beneath it split,

For we were never meant to be

Everything happened so fast,

Without Realizing,

I took the wrong path,

I wish to move on, but it's too hard to bare,

I thought I had you,

Then I realized, I've lost you,

I thought you'd care

Head over heals,

lost in the crowd,

That's my existence

Author's Note

This was written last year, I was always depressed then, I've always expressed my feelings with writing.

Reviews

[Max]

This is a beautiful poem, good job.

[Raven Starhawk]

Love can break a person in a million pieces. Though your poem is sad it was a good read.

[Captive Butterfly]

I love it, it's beautiful and deep and I can just see it in my mind

[Sarah McConnaughey]

This is a sad poem, but still wonderful; I could feel the emotion throughout the whole poem. It flows beautifully and the wording was excellent. I can also relate to it. Great job! :)

[Cafe Reader]

Great writing! Good expressive language!

[No regret]

I loved this poem. can relate with . Great!!

[better off]

My heart is like a broken hour glass,
Time no longer goes by, as if my heart has stopped,
I feel tears roll down my face, feeling of the rain pour beneath my eyes,
I feel the ice spreading through my viens,
As I become paralyzed

I so-loved these words here, this is a quite remarkable write.
I loved the first stanza, simply brillant!!

[Sarah Jane]

Relatable, at leas for me. It beautifully written and full of real emotion, can't wait to read more [:

[deeps]

Wow I really like the opening stanza, such an outpour of bitter emotion. This is a very well written write. I hope to read more from you.