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A Poem by Hope
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An old lyric/poem I wrote a while back, I had been going through a fight with a friend and this came to mind.

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Can you surrender from this war?
Can we be friends or should we start over?
We'd stick together like good times
Or we can fight until the end

Remember the memories we've had together
Remember the times we've spent together
And the battles we've fought together

You're not my enemy
You're not my friend
But this chain holds us together as one

This is no game
Win or lose
We all have our rights
We all have our wrongs
But each path will lead to an end

In this time
You, my friend, are more than a friend
We'll stick together 'till the end
That's what sisters are for

© 2011 Hope


Author's Note

Hope
I decided to make it short. This is dedicated to one of my best friends, we had been through many fights, and every time we'd fought I couldn't handle it not being by her side, and no matter who's fault it was, we'd always forgive and forget.
Because she's like a sister to me.
(:

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nice! It's good to have a friend like that

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Kat
ok review: i thought it was great! it was real, too, not all fake and dumb like some.(not that all fake ones are dumb, but alot are) i also like how in one line you started with the same word as the one before, and used similar words throughout the rest of the line. it wasn't very hard to understand either! overall, a great piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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NAWWWW!!!! THATS what you hid from meh???? ......
NAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(yes, that realy is all i can say at the moment)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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