Running

Running

A Poem by Kat24
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It is about running.

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Running

Running is not as bad as people think it is.

At first I thought running was really bad,

but I thought I can do this if I want to do this.

So then now when I am running for gym I think everytime,

I can do it and just to run to get the running done with in gym.

 

© 2009 Kat24


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Great Job Kat24! It rymbed a little but your on your way still feel as if you are talking insted of writing. but I agree with Michael. Although in the second line you write "Running is not so bad as people think it is" now the "so" should be "as" in the line but other wise it is a great poem. change that and your set.
Raven :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like this, because it is rare to come across a poem featuring running, and done so in a lighthearted way of pondering, i enjoy running as well, i think many people can appreciate the meaning, wonderful job!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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My name is Katherine. I really like sports and hanging out with my friends. My favorite music is Pop. My favorite animals are Cats, Cows, and Rabbits. Thanks for reading my short bio. and don't fo.. more..

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