This is all you need to know

This is all you need to know

A Poem by Sri Gawn Tu Fahr
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The harder you look the less you will find, so trust in your heart and abandon the mind.

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Details are for microscopes,

distances for telescopes,
murky depths for periscopes,
and promises for broken hopes.

They’re all mind’s lies for human dopes,
so throw away that useless rope.
Open up your heart to God,
and let spirit’s river flow,
Love is what you are, sweet soul,
this is all you need to know.

© 2011 Sri Gawn Tu Fahr


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Wow the ending rhymes really make this poem. It must have been hard to craft so it made sense and was effective. It all makes absolute sense and speaks many truths. I like the shift in this poem too..

so throw away that useless rope.
Open up your heart to God,
and let spirit’s river flow,
Love is what you are, sweet soul,
this is all you need to know.

I think this shift on is my favorite part. This is a very strong but simple poem. Thanks for the read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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nice one again...you never stop to amaze me....wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your words are true. In most cases the first reaction is the right one. A powerful poem with strong and positive wisdom. A excellent poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has such flow and power packed into so few words. Very well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Flows perfectly, with an outstanding reach for power, well done, a really good read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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a delight to read..and so much wisdom

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just lovely!! This goes into my Library. Would be nice to get it framed too, very inspirational.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm.... really makes a person think, nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A loving heart leaves a beautiful mark without intending any gain, while a selfish mind has endless goals and always leaves a stain.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow the ending rhymes really make this poem. It must have been hard to craft so it made sense and was effective. It all makes absolute sense and speaks many truths. I like the shift in this poem too..

so throw away that useless rope.
Open up your heart to God,
and let spirit’s river flow,
Love is what you are, sweet soul,
this is all you need to know.

I think this shift on is my favorite part. This is a very strong but simple poem. Thanks for the read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sri Gawn Tu Fahr
Sri Gawn Tu Fahr

Nelson, British Columbia, Canada



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