Life, the Universe and Boyfriends

Life, the Universe and Boyfriends

A Poem by Stabitha
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a poem for teens

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Life, the Universe and Boyfriends

 

 

I read the poems

Of talented teens

 

I read about

Your hopes and dreams

 

I read about

Your boyfriends too

 

And all the pain

They put you through

 

And as I read

I think aloud:

 

Who are these little shitheads

And why don't you just kick them in the balls?

© 2012 Stabitha


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I really like this, it reminds me of youth how i looked at my elders and why they thought the way they did and today, i look i look at the young fools and remember i was once there too.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Heh. I hope you review just like this, it's necessary.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tellin it Like It Is : )

Posted 6 Years Ago


ha ha, a slightly aggrivated end...worthy of an anti social behaviour, caution!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Stabitha

6 Years Ago

lmao
This made me laugh, it's very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stabitha

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
i love this so much! its so funny and not forgetting that it's actually a good poem too; well written and all that xxx :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stabitha

7 Years Ago

Thank you Daniela :)
HAHAHAHA I love this! Oh my gosh! So true and such a simple solution! The next time one of my friends complains about the-boy-who-broke-her-heart I'm simply sending them a read request. This is great! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stabitha

7 Years Ago

thanks so much :)
Owlgirl

7 Years Ago

lol you're welcome :)
Such a simple solution haha, I love the bluntness of this one, it's quite refreshing actually. Great writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stabitha

7 Years Ago

cheers :)
Love the ending. As a teenager I can say, this is so true. And, honestly, I did kick mine in the balls. Not that he shows up in my poetry much. ^_^ Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stabitha

7 Years Ago

hahaha well done!
cool poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Stabitha

7 Years Ago

cheers :)

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Stabitha
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