MyHeartWontBeatForAnother

MyHeartWontBeatForAnother

A Poem by StarSandwich
"

They said i shouldn't go no further, that i shouldn't be with him. My heart wont beat for another, The way it beats for him.

"
I remember the day so clearly,
Our day out in the snow.
We walked, we talked
Underneath the streetlights glow.

How could i have know i had fallen,
I should have know that day.
Maybe i shouldn't have left,
With no other words to say. 

You stole my heart, 
You took the Key.
But now i may Never drink your tea.

They said i shouldn't go no further, 
that i shouldn't be with him. 
My heart wont beat for another, 
The way it beats for him.  

© 2011 StarSandwich


Author's Note

StarSandwich
My first love one, I know i suck but you know :D

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fantastic write my dear..i just loved it..
so simple but magical...your lover must feel great..and get tears in
his eyes if you show this to him:)
added to my favorites..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well , I love the tempo of the whole poem.

I could make a cheeky joke at your comment above on authors note, but I won't lol.



Posted 12 Years Ago



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