Your Last Chance

I told you last night, tonight is your last chance.

I told you last night, tonight our last dance.

I hear her you in the distance, your calling out my name.

I know you used to love me, but I know we wont be the same.

Your boyfriend stands beside you, I'm no lover just a friend.

You know my heart is breaking, but yours you'll will never lend.

I used to spending my time, just making your smile grow.

But now you stand before me, how did you sink that low.

You pick on peoples looks, you laugh at there style.

But I can see right though you, your hooked on such denial.

But I can end this quickly, I'm just your friend.

I know that you need me, but I need this to end.

That Kiss lets just forget it, no longer will I stand.

No Longer will I hold out, such a loving hand.

So sit there with your boyfriend, I've let go of your hand.

So we'll just sit here in silence, on my feet I'll hopefully land.

No longer will I see you, to night was your last chance.

No longer will I hold you, because tonight was our last dance.

Author's Note

Another quickly done random poem :)

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Love it! I like how this flows. Keep up the good work

[what-the-frick]

I like this a lot! It's really hard to let go sometimes ... I love the last 2 lines!

[brenda]

* sigh* * sigh * this was really sad but well done !:p

[M.D]

It would cool to take first words of lines and make up something like "I ,I, I, I, love you, But, but, do, you, love, me, so, so, no, no" =)otherwise this poem is helluva good! ^^

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome. I love it!!

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

that was amazing. i can erally relate. i hate it when you like someone and they are with another person and dont even take notice to you when you want them, and then when you give up, they want you. you covered it good buddy pal. super job!!!!!!!

[guiltyascharged]

This is. So good. I love it. So hard.

[SinnerInspired]

LOVE IT! Its beautiful& heart breaking

[Midnight_Lullaby]

loved it! flows nicely Star,excellent job

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Exceptional poem, reads so delightfully, the word play and use of ryhmes is nothing short of top rated :)