Repeat

Repeat

A Poem by Quinn

When I’m drunk does it show I’m trapped or too free?
Because when I’m drunk I don’t know if it’s me

When I drink I am alive, I am relieved
But is that feeling true, or just perceived?

When I’m drinking I know I do some things
Things I will regret, that come with many strings

When I’m hung over it usually comes back
Hits me like the headache,  a train on a track

When I’m on the come down I realise the mess
I realise how often I must have said yes

When I’m sober I think about what I’ve done
I swear I won’t have another single one

When I have a bottle or I’m given one
I think, what could go wrong? Just a little fun

© 2016 Quinn


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Quinn
Thank you for reading, hope you liked it x

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When I have a bottle or I’m given one
I think, what could go wrong? Just a little fun

These lines are amazing. Got me chuckle so hard. Remind me of ladies times -- the time they use to spend with wine, in ladies kinky party nights. Had one online friend who used to spend her Friday with wine and her best girl-friend. lol

Hope you also enjoy your fun with gurl-friends. xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quinn

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I do now however I used to drink alone a lot.
Wórdsmíth

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. Drinking alone help especially us writers go in deep... into the depth of one's holl.. read more



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When I have a bottle or I’m given one
I think, what could go wrong? Just a little fun

These lines are amazing. Got me chuckle so hard. Remind me of ladies times -- the time they use to spend with wine, in ladies kinky party nights. Had one online friend who used to spend her Friday with wine and her best girl-friend. lol

Hope you also enjoy your fun with gurl-friends. xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quinn

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I do now however I used to drink alone a lot.
Wórdsmíth

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. Drinking alone help especially us writers go in deep... into the depth of one's holl.. read more
I did , its what makes you a real writer

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quinn

8 Years Ago

Thank you x

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Quinn
Quinn

Glasgow, United Kingdom



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