IF

IF

A Poem by Stefano Ianiro

If the moment we’re in can end our song,

Then a moment with you will do the same.

If the words you said were wrong all along,

Then it is better I forget your name.


If the emptiness you call home moves on,

Then I will reside there with an open heart.

If, when falling; the darkness is withdrawn,

Then tears will show my forever depart.


If the clouds pile up; too strong to hold,

Then my heaven with you may live again.

If my heart would beat and never grow old,

Then into your arms is where I’ll descend.

© 2011 Stefano Ianiro


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THis was magnificent! so sweet and emotional!

Posted 6 Years Ago


so well written, it just flows so beautifully. :]

Posted 6 Years Ago


love the last line... so beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool. I like how you used the word IF as a launching point for the whole piece, subtly questioning with each thought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This one is really amaazing as well.
Love the flow and rhyme scheme.
You have talent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"If the moment we're in can end our song,
Then a moment with you will do the same.
If the words you said were wrong all along,
Then it is better I forget your name."
Has some kind of tune to it, almost as if I've heard it before. All of it seems like that, but I know I haven't seen it before in the same way. You've got quite a talent that I see, you know? I should read more still. Is there any that you'd request?

-Marie Riorden-

Posted 8 Years Ago


your poem is amazing. you make it so the people reading this, can feel the feelings you did or still feel. what I got out of it: there are a million "what if's" in the world, but to the what if's you can take a stand.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice writing.... I like whole poem... Keep it up... God bless you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


:O 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


"clouds pile up; too strong to hold"

i love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Stefano Ianiro
Stefano Ianiro

Montreal, Canada



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I'm Stefano, 19, Montreal. I love writing, talking, photography, filming, music and on and on it goes. I find dreams far superior than modern day reality. Follow me on Twitter at: @StefanoIaniro more..

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