Mental IIlness

Mental IIlness

A Poem by StephL
"

Life with Illnesses.

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If you're bipolar, does it count as suicide ?
With nothing left to hide inside?
Another year around the sun
with no place left to run.

If you are depressed
Can your feelings get repressed?
Or are you stuck with them?
is there nothing you can do man?

Once you start to go crazy;
Is there nothing that can save me?
Is there is something worth saving
if it not a life worth living?

Remember how it feels when you're alone
When all your chances at happiness are blown.
When you start to hear voices
You've ran out of choices.

an illness that controls the mind
Always comes from inside. 

© 2013 StephL


Author's Note

StephL
I have depression but nothing else, I do have a class about them, the first thing we learn is to get help and fight.

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I like it. Love the questioning. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


your last liners are always the best -it's like you started with them and worked backwards (:

nice piece, and you're a strong person writing about your illness the way you just did.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well written...
I use to have depression so I know what thats like and I do understand a lot about Mental Illness

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on January 29, 2013
Last Updated on January 29, 2013
Tags: Mental, illnesses, saving, life, living

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StephL
StephL

Gatineau, Quebec, Canada



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