Love Is Crazy

Love Is Crazy

A Poem by StephanieDenise
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First poem up comments, reviews, pleaseee?(:

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Love.Is.Crazy.

Never-ending, Pointless spending.

Waste of breath, nothing less.

Trying to fix, imagined list.

Hate is fate but hate creates heart break & frustrates.

But still within, nothing is mend.

Walking through halls & playing pretend.

Unforseen places, recognized faces, all lapse into a dark, empty daze.

 Hoping to redo, having nothing to lose, all pile into an angry fuse.

One which will explode because of the blows it took whenever love was exposed.

Still, it stays for all of it's days, but praying it fades because of the craze.

Love isn't there, but friendship is fair wholeheartidly, I would assume to dare.

© 2012 StephanieDenise


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thank you everyone so much! I'm new on here so It's great to have welcoming people :D I'm looking forward to reading everyone's stuff!


Posted 11 Years Ago


They should keep that in a dictionary because that was the greatest definion of love i know! Great Job! I want to see more from you!
-Melody

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like that you gave a great definition to love! :)
Love the poem! Keep up with the writing!
Welcome to our cafe! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dropping bombs haha i like the fast pace of the poem i apolgize because i am not as elequent as others

Posted 11 Years Ago



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StephanieDenise
StephanieDenise

Goldsboro, NC



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I'm 16 & I love to write. I write to heal my soul & I write to heal others. Words are not only words to me but they are everything. You are mostly defined not by your actions, but words. So therefore,.. more..

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