dreaming

I held her hand
In a dream I had
as we lay down on the beach
I looked in her eyes
She looked in mine
As the water washed our feet
The wind was still
The sun shone down
As we drank that rose wine
My eyes came to
The room was dark
And again she was out of reach.

Reviews

[Boundbytheinkinpages]

I love your writing, specifically this. Simple yet very touching,, =)

[Sarah Redigan]

This squeezes my heart ... so sad to want something so much that your mind plays tricks ... nice write love

Xxx
SR

[Arsh]

Ooh... it's quiet deep but full of romance & the strong peaceful feelings of heart. Nice poetry!