Chickens

Chickens

A Poem by Steve Thompson

So its 5:15 pm, and there is a rooster in my backyard

I am still trying to put this together

the question of can I or whether I will is open as a 24 hour CVS

condoms in glass, baby can wait

there is some liqour in the back, its 3pm

very right side up, hand standing- I don't do it for attention

pants down would be that

 

Maybe a blockbuster rental, 10 am, right before lunch

tung ring, you wiggle- I do enjoy working for a good meal

but you know I ain't chicken...

 

I will get back to this a little later,

 

 

 

© 2009 Steve Thompson


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Steve Thompson
School of Chaos

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I'm interested in why the times are conflicting in this piece...is this looking back in to the day that's already passed, or looking forward to tomorrow's activities. I also like the confusion...it gives the drunken vibe a little extra oomph. interesting...I'll be waiting to see where you go with this piece.

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I'm interested in why the times are conflicting in this piece...is this looking back in to the day that's already passed, or looking forward to tomorrow's activities. I also like the confusion...it gives the drunken vibe a little extra oomph. interesting...I'll be waiting to see where you go with this piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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