Death and Rebirth

Something written for my band. I'm really sure what direction I'm going to take this honestly.

We are Darkness.
We are shadow.
Formless, swirling.
Crawling, endless.
Avoiding the light,
We are the obselecence of hope.
The absolution of black.
The blanket of night in your dreams.
We the dark the lives inside of you.
Now is the time to awaken...

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Hey, this was pretty good so far! I like the words you used and the message you portrayed. A couple corrections I would make (not that this is bad or anything) would be the second to last line about the dark living inside you could be put after "we are shadow". Then keep the formless, swirling part. Lastly, I would put the "avoiding the light, we are..." line after that, then put the "crawling,endless". I read it through certain times and with these corrections, I feel it would flow a bit better :) great write!