Untitled.

My friend and I wrote this together. His name is Dillon. :D

Let me find the way into your heart so I may never leave,

Just to make you happy, is the reason I breathe,

I feel that this is the start to something new,

So, let me just say that I love you,

For as long as a breath shall hold, or even be released, 

You shall forever be, my Fur-Elise,

Though times may be tough, a bumpy road calls us hither,

 Our love, our future, will never wither,

Through this day; also many past and after, 

My love for you is one huge factor,

That will never be trumped upon, nor shall it be null,

For till the end of days, our love shall never grow dull. 

Author's Note

Just something thrown together.

Reviews

[Elege]

I like this. I'm not the greatest for reviews. But I can see talent, and I feel where your coming from. Maybe though I twist it to my own meaning, my own darkness.

[StillUnwritten]

Thank you!

[Winter]

Very interesting.. Also very deep. I like it. Keep writing.

[StillUnwritten]

Thank you very much.

[BrokenGirl]

YOU PUT UP YOURS AND DILLON'S POEM?
Gaw I love this thing :P

[StillUnwritten]

Of course I did. I even put his name on this.