Revealed

Revealed

A Poem by Voice11
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To my special someone

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I want to play a song for you

a song about my dreams

that tells of the future before us

and that love is all I seek


I've seen to it that every friend

I've ever had that was lost

was led back into the light

but my heart it surely cost


Pieces torn with each saved soul

and how could I bare the shame

when some hearts too were lost

disappeared beneath my name


When all effort seemed a waste

my heart had worn away

my light engulfed by their darkness

and there the only place to stay


My eyes became blind with blackness

to me there was no way out

dark and cold and alone

my heart now filled with doubt


No one  I could reach for

too scared to say a word

no one I saw noticed

I thought I would  never be cured


I looked to the Lord to take my fears

in the next few days they were gone

My heart he cleansed and made anew

and here begins my song


I lived protected by my walls

I kept up every single day

around my heart they stayed

till that moment you looked my way


I knew something was different

but no matter how hard I tried

whenever I talked to you

I knew you weren't one to lie


to me you were peculiar

but still I paid no mind

to the light you had around you

and your hand as it reached for mine


The Good Lord knows I was caught off guard

when you called me on my ways

And that day I took a leap of faith

as I looked strongly into your gaze


I knew that what I had prayed for

In you, was now before my eyes

And I hesitated at first to think...

Could I now take off my disguise?


Days turned to weeks as our love grew strong

The light you returned to my eyes

As the only one I revealed my whole heart to

I had finally taken off my disguise =)


Now weeks have turned to months

Though I try not to count the days

As our differences turn to strengths

And I still look strongly into your gaze


I thank the good Lord for bringing me you

Because in you He surely brought  me new life

A future held in our heads and our hearts

And I one day hope to be your wife

© 2010 Voice11


Author's Note

Voice11
Well This was written because my significant other had read some of the writings on my WC profile. Most of them are from past relationships but he didn't know and asked if any were for him. He has been waiting a log time for me to write something just for us. I believe he is the real deal and so I didn't want to drain all the emotion out of it. But I wrote this and I still love him with all of my heart! I know,Imma big sap =)

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Wow. This was like reading your faith story. Thank you for the courage to put it to paper! I could tell you're deeply tied to the words. Interesting smiley face by the stanza about being disguised, added a personal touch- or a cue to an inside message that's special to you and your future husband. Loved it. Thank you for the inspiring read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This isn't sappy,it's really beautiful! I like poems that have a sentimental theme but still don't sound depressing

awesome job!!


Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice tribute to your partner. Very inspirational and full of faith.

Posted 9 Years Ago


AWWW. =) Your not a big sap and this is really pretty. I loved reading it. Beautiful write!!

Voice


Posted 9 Years Ago


I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, I thought this poem but insanely good and sweet. This was beautiful. The only problem I had with it was the lack of punctuation marks made it kind of hard to read. Other than that, great job! Loved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aw, this is so pretty. I'm sure your special person must love it. The last line was so heartwarming.

I could relate to everything except the finding love part. Anyways, when we put faith in God and let him handle our problems, things will work out for the best.

Wonderful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Poem is beautiful. I like the faith and hope in your words. A wise person know when we have something good in a life. The story was kind and hopeful. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


great i really loved this:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked it, nice work. :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


What wonderful sentiments. Keep up with your writing, you have a nice talent for it.

Antonio

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow. This was like reading your faith story. Thank you for the courage to put it to paper! I could tell you're deeply tied to the words. Interesting smiley face by the stanza about being disguised, added a personal touch- or a cue to an inside message that's special to you and your future husband. Loved it. Thank you for the inspiring read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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