the cripple and i

during the interim

i have become

bloodless

waiting, it seems

is detrimental to

substance

substance, it seems

is no more than

desire

Reviews

[Tourist the Sleepwalker]

Crippled inside essentially

[Tourist the Sleepwalker]

From these words I imagined a heart broken man viewing life through it's most base elements.I took 'substance' to mean 'life'

[Cory Barrett]

Thank you for reading!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

starved for love...in between relationships...desire is there...but someone needed to get that passionate blood reflowing....and the waiting feels like it starts to make the desire wane...

j.

[Cory Barrett]

Starving indeed. Thank you for reading Jacob!

[Ana Papaya]

feeling starved for something, whatever that something is, can leave you feeling like a cripple without a crutch

[Cory Barrett]

True that. Thank you for reading!