A String of Unraveled Subconscious Thoughts

A String of Unraveled Subconscious Thoughts

A Poem by Sugar is not sweet
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A poem that came from a place I don't understand, the subconscious.

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Why must we be
Unfriendly when I have no choice
But to follow you
Amongst other peers.

The way you look at me
As if I were a tin can
Only time will tell the difference.

Perhaps if I had a bag
To throw around
I would be able to see
The plastic swirling around my face.

The shades of grey it contains
The crinkling sound that erupts from its place
The blinding highlights and reflections it releases
A simple no would've been enough.

© 2015 Sugar is not sweet


Author's Note

Sugar is not sweet
I was trying an interesting approach to find out what hidden subconscious thoughts float inside my head. None of it was edited, I just wanted it to be fully raw and exactly the sentences that came from the top of my head. Any opinions or comments are appreciated. Thanks for reading.

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Added on January 14, 2015
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